youth
jackets
stuck
ripping
strait jackets
never stuck
she’s ripping
love youth
you’re never stuck
she’s ripping, cutting
love youth, everlasting
wear strait jackets
she’s ripping, cutting cords
love youth, everlasting energy
all wear strait jackets
you’re never stuck, choice
love youth, everlasting energy abounds
we all wear strait jackets
you’re never stuck, choice exists
She’s ripping, cutting cords… freedom!
Im so intrigued by the form, the building. Very original.
I know right! I just created it.. I love it… it is needs more work but I think I just created a new form of poetry…
I read it backwards too. both ways were pretty powerful.
Oh YES
does this mean you like it?
I don’t think most people are understanding it
I really like this one! Your form here is new, but I really like it
Front to back, back to front the story is told…. Very insightful and creative! 
Thank you very much. I am hoping to write a series of these and see where they lead me… I like the idea of free style and improv writing
I love unbridled poetry. There’s so much creation in us to create our own masterpieces. Oh, and thanks for liking my post!
This is so good – we all put ourselves in boxes that we think we can’t get out of – and as long as we think that way we never will. It’s all up to us. You started by taking yourself out of the box of the conventional poet. Bravo!
I will be doing more poems like this soon to keep pushing and see what comes out
Freedom!
sent shivers to my skin. Awesome piece man. Thanks for liking too!