So, this time I challenged myself to write a poem based off of five words I did not choose. In a facebook post I asked for five people to give me one word each to start off my poem. The words were boobs, no, spandex, randomness and why. (horrible words) I think I did ok considering what I had to start with. I also challenged myself to write in the new style I just created a few weeks ago. It’s truly difficult to get a meaning across in so few words. Next weeks will be more intimate I believe. This poem makes me shake my head.. please enjoy.
Boobs!
No
Spandex
Randomness…
Why?
No more!
Like spandex
The randomness
Asking why?
Like boobs
Soul like spandex
Experience the randomness
Children asking why
Like boobs, as;
Say no more!
Experience the randomness of
Children asking why, we
Like boobs as much;
Just, say no more.
Soul like spandex, stretching
Children asking why we die,
Like boobs, as much as
Just, say no more love…
A soul like spandex stretching
Experiencing the randomness of life
Like boobs as much as eyes
Just, say no more, love, breath.
A soul like spandex stretching forever
You, experiencing the randomness of life
Children asking why we die….lie!
Really cool idea….
thanks..
Good job of working with what you were given.
thanks! it’s fun
you did quite well considering what you had to work with!
lol it’s a fun style.. thanks for liking it
You did a great job! Brilliant..
much appreciated .. it was not easy
I like this especially since you were not given easy words. Great job!
Thank you.. it really wasn’t easy
I believe you! It is hard to work with just boobs and a few other words. Great idea though, hope to maybe see more of this
you will see more of this style probably not much of throwing it out to Facebook.. it’s too unpredictable.. but I like the idea of a little freestyle
Awesome!
much said
with so little.
Good job.
Love the idea. gotta love your facebook friends for such mature and creative (and helpful) language. smiles. Here are five more that have been whirling in my head today: expression, value, freak, desire, decline. here’s to writing *raises her laptop
I will see what I can do with those as well… let the challenge commence
Feel free to give me a complaint…so I can find the Beauty in it…