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number 2

So, this time I challenged myself to write a poem based off of five words I did not choose. In a facebook post I asked for five people to give me one word each to start off my poem. The words were boobs, no, spandex, randomness and why. (horrible words) I think I did ok considering what I had to start with. I also challenged myself to write in the new style I just created a few weeks ago. It’s truly difficult to get a meaning across in so few words. Next weeks will be more intimate I believe. This poem makes me shake my head.. please enjoy. :)  

 

Boobs!

No

Spandex

Randomness…

Why?

 

No more!

Like spandex

 The randomness

 Asking why?

 Like boobs

 

 Soul like spandex

 Experience the randomness

Children asking why

 Like boobs, as;

 Say no more!

 

 Experience the randomness of

 Children asking why, we

 Like boobs as much;

 Just, say no more.

 Soul like spandex, stretching

 

 Children asking why we die,

 Like boobs, as much as

 Just, say no more love…

 A soul like spandex stretching

 Experiencing the randomness of life

 

 Like boobs as much as eyes

 Just, say no more, love, breath.

 A soul like spandex stretching forever

 You, experiencing the randomness of life

Children asking why we die….lie!

 

About ineffablemrjones

just a guy floating through the Universe on the breath of God.

17 Responses to number 2

  1. Gecko

    Good job of working with what you were given.

  2. you did quite well considering what you had to work with!

  3. octavia02

    You did a great job! Brilliant..

  4. I like this especially since you were not given easy words. Great job!

  5. much said
    with so little.
    Good job.

  6. Love the idea. gotta love your facebook friends for such mature and creative (and helpful) language. smiles. Here are five more that have been whirling in my head today: expression, value, freak, desire, decline. here’s to writing *raises her laptop

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